Hello everyone welcome back to my blog.
We were doing writing with Mr Scott. We had to make a blockbuster movie draft. I had 826 words in my draft. I have really enjoyed this project it was so much fun. We also had to do a slide show in work with this but its already on my blog cheek it out.
Here is my work
Nick and Miles were playing in Miles' backyard then Miles’ mum came out to tell Nick something. The boys had a sit down on the couch. Miles’ mum told Nick that his family died at the family reunion that he did not go to. They had died in a shooting. She asked if Nick would like to live with them and he said, “ Yes.”
15 YEARS LATER.
The boys made it to the army. They were hanging out together having food when they saw a poster saying one of them could become the best soldier in the world. They both looked at each other and said, I'm gonna get this first in a space of 2 months.” They worked harder then they have ever before. The 2 month time period was over and they were ready to announce who it was. They said, “ Good luck,” to each other. “THE WINNER IS … MILES”. Miles shook Nick’s hand and went up to the stage and accepted the power.
1 WEEK LATER
Miles found out there is an alien in the facility. The head of the army made him choose between the alien and Nick. “If you pick Nick you will lose your powers,”
is what the general said to Miles It took him 2 days to decide. He picked the alien. Nick was devastated and left the army. Miles named the alien Axle. He loved the name.
10 YEARS LATER
Miles and Axle were hanging out together when Miles’ phone went off with a call from the commander saying there were 2 villains close to the Eiffel tower and the White House. Miles looked at Axle and said, “ It’s time for your first solo mission.” Miles wanted to protect his home county of USA so they parted ways. Miles saw the villain he was after; he beat him faster than you could say fish and chips. Once he defeated him a hologram came out saying “I have your alien friend and if you don't get him in one weeks time you will never see him again and if I see backup he will be gone”.
He went to Paris as fast as he could. He lost all hope but then he found a clue. It was Axle’s footprints he followed disappeared from out of nowhere. A man popped out of the corner and came up behind Miles. He asked him if he was looking for the little alien. At first Miles was hesitant but he had to save him. He took a deep breath and said “Yes.” The man said to him that he may know where he is. He asked if Miles would like to stay at his house for the night. He accepted.
The night went past. Miles couldn't get to sleep. He’s blaming himself, “What's going to happen to Axle if he doesn't get there in time.?”
The next morning Miles woke up and the man told him to follow him. They went to the Eiffel tower. The man talked about how hard his friend fought. But then the man took Miles on the route he saw the person take his alien. They reached the house. The man said he will no longer go with him. Miles thanked the man for all the things he did. Miles took a deep breath and went inside.
The door squeaked when Miles opened it. There was fog covering the house. Then a loud speaker came on saying “so you found me now you have to make it through my goons.” people came down from the stairs. Miles was determined to beat up the goons. There were many goons.
5 goons rushed Miles he dodged their first attack and punched them into next week 10 more came down Miles wiped them out easy. Then a man with a super suit came down holding Axle and threw him across the room. He said that to get Axle he had to beat him.
Miles and the man went through the roof. Axle slowly got up he saw them go through the roof and followed them on the floor. Miles is having a hard fight against this man but will never give up. They started going to the round fire started appear around them when they hit the ground they made a crater in the pavement the man got up before Miles and went to the top and said I have been waiting for this for years and pulled out a gun *bang* Miles just woke up when the gun shot but he had no gun hole then he looked to his left and saw Axle took the bullet for him.
Miles yelled “noooooooo” The man took off his mask……. It was Nick. Miles was crying then he looked to his left and saw Nick he was so mad just when Miles was about to punch him into next week Nick said I know how to get him back.
THE END
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Luke
