Hello everyone welcome back to my blog.
For term 2 for writing we are learning how to change telling sentences into describing sentences.
One of the many ways to change telling sentences into describing is using your five sense, the five sense are taste, smell, touch, see and hearing. We all made a story, my story is about a kid getting beaten up at school. Here is some examples of telling and describing.
I smelt the cake it was nice.
The cake smelt delicious.
Here is my writing.
The scooter was going fast on footpath I had a big grin until I saw the seven boys then I felt scared. I heard them in a loud voice saying Na I get his scooter. Then I got blinded by the bright sun then one of them pounced on me but I was holding my scooter to tight. But the footpath was to bumpy for me to scooter away I couldn't
cross the road because there was too much construction than I smelt the seven boys when they went past they smelt disgusting.
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Kind regards
Luke
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