We have been doing a new writing doc. It is a collaborative writing doc where we work on language features. The one we have been doing is onomatopoeia we made bullet points and made them into a paragraph.
Here is my paragraph
The guides in the high-vis jacket told me where to stand in a loud voice. I heard the crack from the pistol Then ran off the start of the track like Usain bolt.The audience was screaming and cheering for multiple contestants. The other racers where puffing behind me and there feet litley thudding. The commentator was saying in a loud voice “look at him go”.
Thank you for reading my blog post hope you had a nice week, don't hesitate to comment.
Kind regards
Luke
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