On Tuesday we started our week 6 Hotspot where we looked at a image and started to write.
Here is my writing and the images that inspired it.
The war just started on Zipton it was the newcomers vs the Ziptoneuyons. The newcomers had high tech weapons then suddenly the Ziptoneuyons came out with a tank that shoots plasma beams. the newcomers were sceptical because they were the only ones that kind of technology. Then they shoot of the tank *pew* *pew* is all you could hear. The beam was bigger than the Eiffel Tower. The large plasma beam fired at the newcomers. They lost a quarter of their 10 billion army. Then the newcomers fired a huge nuke fired and killed both army’s except the two of their captains they decided to sign a trues and rebuild what they destroyed on the planet Zipton. The end.
Thank you for reading my blog. Don't hesitate to comment.
Kind regards
Luke
Hey Luke,
ReplyDelete"I like the way you describe the picture in your own way of your imagination and used that word in your post 'Ziptoneuyons' it took along time for me to find out that word in the dictionary"
"I may not know that word but I can understand you made that word up for your planet picture in imagination your writing is quite amazing and I also like the way you put in 'pew' for your sound by using your Onomatopoeia from the writing that we do, its quite cool"
Kind Regards
:)Harmony