We have done a 100 word hotspot challenge where we had to use multiple descriptive words such as ,Disillusioned, Fragile,Exquisite,Blustery. Miss D said that our W.A.L.T is that we only can use important sentence anyways here is my awesome writing p.s i went over by one word.
My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn’t stop. A grey car I didn’t recognize pulled up beside me. I saw the driver through his tinted windows I started to run then I felt the Blustery Wind as the car followed me from afar. Then I ran past a police station I sneakily went into the building I saw an Exquisite looking interview room I went to the reception and asked them for help. She could tell I was Fragile she said,” go into the room.”
I talked to the men and told them how I felt Disillusioned.
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Kind regards
Luke
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