We have been doing are Hotspot writing once again. W.A.L.T Write in past-progressive tense. Use powerful action verbs Only include what is powerful, meaningful and important. Miss D gave us the starter of , “No, no, no!” I was sliding back into the dream. Here are the vocabulary word we had to use in out story Grasping, Tumbling, Creaking, Sniffling. Here is my work No, no, no!” I was sliding back into the dream. I was Tumbling down mount everest screaming for help “Help help” I started crashing *crash* into all kinds of rocks. I Heard my back cracking *crack* when I hit rocks. I tumbled near a village a blurry figure running towards me as I was Grasping a neby pole. Suddenly I fell unconscious. Waking up in a room I started sniffling. I could smell some bacon and eggs. Limping down the stairs as I saw my Dad that ran away when I was 10. ( I would see him on social media) He did not see me when I said, “Dad is that you?''
He was in shock as he said “Tobis is that you”? “Yes it is Dad” I heard someone creeping down the hallway. I tried to see who it was my Dad stopped me I pushed past him and I saw a kid that looked the 10. Then I yelled at my dad “ARE YOU GOING TO LEAVE HIM TO!” He yelled “go to the room you woke up in”
I was sneaking out the door unexpectedly started creaking but my Dad and his son were in a deep sleep as I tried to get out of the door instantaneously ??? Find out next book
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Luke
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